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Post by Drew Draken on Aug 21, 2008 9:42:29 GMT -5
rbcr.proboards66.com/index.cgi?board=city&action=display&thread=1560Even though it is short, and just one person narrative, I rather enjoy the idea behind the plot the writer has started for himself. Though one note...I read this a few times and on the final time I noticed that sometimes the colors between Darius and Farius are one of the same. Just a heads up on watching that for more or next time. *HUGS*
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Post by Darius Synn Draken on Aug 21, 2008 9:58:46 GMT -5
Thank you...and ya i noticed that awhile back...just been to lazy to fix it LoL I will do it now
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