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Post by nick on Oct 11, 2008 11:16:29 GMT -5
Link Author:Malicous _________________ I have to say I have enjoyed reading the beginning of this story. The part where Malicious is thought as Peter Pan is quite funny especially the part where Eric leanrs in a way that wanting to fly is not always recommended. I cant wait to see how the story unfolds, but I hope it will be as pleasent as the first two post.
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Malicous
Creature of the Night
~If I keep smiling will you go away?~
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Post by Malicous on Oct 11, 2008 11:49:30 GMT -5
thanks for the kudos Nick's mun ^_^ I'll be adding on to it as soon as i check a few things as far as rating go >> can't scare/traumatize the kiddies and all that jazz.
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Post by nick on Oct 11, 2008 11:52:24 GMT -5
Well your story is not too grusome and its not that scary. Its just a creepy version of peterpan. Which peter pan is a fave for me.
You are welcome by the way. I cant wait the rest.
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Malicous
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Post by Malicous on Oct 11, 2008 19:32:25 GMT -5
Yeah i talked to Nems and she said it wouldn't push the envelope so lets hope i don't get too carried away ~.~
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Post by nick on Oct 12, 2008 5:38:48 GMT -5
Well I just hope the story continues with such humor and gore
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